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AUTUMN POEMS

Autumn leaf

Be not alone
all are lonely

somewhere in the vastness of eternity
someone calls out instantly
still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
then loneliness vanishes

unknown comes in one’s dreams
screams
where have you been
one says
are you now asking
an autumn leaf

the invisible one smiles alongside
now 'tis autumn
there is no surprise

hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside

Foolhardy Lovers

They all fall in love
on Face Book
or any sites
all those who so appear
are not themselves in reality

few are like humming birds
some chasing living ghosts
many are mad in their musings
thinking them to be shadows

Who and Why

should they just fall in love
with creatures so strange
they will never meet ever
I say again and again

love abounds in hearts two
if one is known
another is new
but both should feel the urge
a desire to fall in love
with just someone’s ink
in liquid or a magnificent form
whatever they may think

Love Between Srangers
is maddening
isn't it midday imaging
often all keep wondering

as do these autumn leaves
all like human bees

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

indeed! We pollinate wherever and whenever the chance grows. Like setting on a blossom, listening to the hum of wings and probiscus drinking the nectar. Summern passes way too quickly and the clothing of the trees, falls to the ground and hides the grass. Let the leaves leave well enough alone.~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

It seems you liked it...
Tomorrow I shall post another
woman comparison with an AUTUMN TREE
WOW TIS it

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enjoy it! I await with baited breath, the next installment. ~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

23 hours Why does Paul not revise it
PERHAPS each poet must comment on one poem
then post another
All are not like me
MACHINE GUN POETS
of jess era
Dearest GEE
please wake up the powers that be

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GEEE

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Beautiful, free flowing poem. I only have one objection. It is the line "they will never meet ever". My first impression is that the ever is unnecessary and redundant. My second impression is a lunatic one! They will never meet Ever, as though Ever becomes a personification of indefinite time. Now I can't make up my mind if I like this line or not. So, feel free to completely ignore this advice!

reading the second AUTUMN COME
POEMS
THNKS

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I like the poem because of its theme of love.
Good piece, nice poem!

read the second AUTUMN ...
You will love that more

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