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Dads Love

Yeah my dad loved me
gave away all he had
to other greedy siblings...

left me a life long memory
he comes to me daily
six decades since
kisses me

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Free verse
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A life long dads memory
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Hello, Lovedly,
I get a mixture of feelings here, but a sweet reflection, too.

After posting this small poem my dad came in my dream
He said ''Don't worry...WAIT AND SEE...ENJOY LIFE... ONE DAY IT WILL RAIN GOLD FOR THEE..See my picture this ...But you can't download it ..Be brave as always''
Grand message he is still out there somewhere..... Lav waiting for me .
But I am in no hurry my family is right here with me

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What a wonderful dream! I'm happy for you, Lovedly.

indebted to you I remain

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A fact cannot be declined KINDNESS

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Good poem. I sense that your siblings seemed to got more response from your father, he seems to be always with you even after his oassing

so true he died when I was around

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