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AUTUMN POEMS
Autumn leaf
Be not alone
all are lonely
somewhere in the vastness of eternity
someone calls out instantly
still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
then loneliness vanishes
unknown comes in one’s dreams
screams
where have you been
one says
are you now asking
an autumn leaf
the invisible one smiles alongside
now 'tis autumn
there is no surprise
hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside
Foolhardy Lovers
They all fall in love
on Face Book
or any sites
all those who so appear
are not themselves in reality
few are like humming birds
some chasing living ghosts
many are mad in their musings
thinking them to be shadows
Who and Why
should they just fall in love
with creatures so strange
they will never meet ever
I say again and again
love abounds in hearts two
if one is known
another is new
but both should feel the urge
a desire to fall in love
with just someone’s ink
in liquid or a magnificent form
whatever they may think
Love Between Srangers
is maddening
isn't it midday imaging
often all keep wondering
as do these autumn leaves
all like human bees
Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2022-06-22 19:45
human bees...
indeed! We pollinate wherever and whenever the chance grows. Like setting on a blossom, listening to the hum of wings and probiscus drinking the nectar. Summern passes way too quickly and the clothing of the trees, falls to the ground and hides the grass. Let the leaves leave well enough alone.~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-06-22 20:03
GEEEZZZZZZZZZZ
It seems you liked it...
Tomorrow I shall post another
woman comparison with an AUTUMN TREE
WOW TIS it
Geezer
Wed, 2022-06-22 20:23
I did...
enjoy it! I await with baited breath, the next installment. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Wed, 2022-06-22 20:32
your restrictions installed by jess you still follow
23 hours Why does Paul not revise it
PERHAPS each poet must comment on one poem
then post another
All are not like me
MACHINE GUN POETS
of jess era
Dearest GEE
please wake up the powers that be
lovedly
Thu, 2022-06-23 15:51
just posted
GEEE
Lord Barham
Thu, 2022-06-23 21:48
Lovedly poem!
Beautiful, free flowing poem. I only have one objection. It is the line "they will never meet ever". My first impression is that the ever is unnecessary and redundant. My second impression is a lunatic one! They will never meet Ever, as though Ever becomes a personification of indefinite time. Now I can't make up my mind if I like this line or not. So, feel free to completely ignore this advice!
lovedly
Thu, 2022-06-23 21:56
DO make up your minds after
reading the second AUTUMN COME
POEMS
THNKS
Mr joghe
Fri, 2022-06-24 08:47
I like the poem because of
I like the poem because of its theme of love.
Good piece, nice poem!
"Words are currency of ideas and have the power to change world. Ride your pen on the rough road."
lovedly
Fri, 2022-06-24 12:37
Thanks all above
read the second AUTUMN ...
You will love that more