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TRYING HAIKU SEXY BYTE

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2023-03-16 04:14

Best way to pass time
is to waste it
about a small waist...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Thu, 2023-03-16 10:43

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to do with your vacation? I'm hoping that those cocktail bars on the beach have a few half-naked waitresses to serve the
panting old men, who tip recklessly for a peek at a future they have already passed. LoL
~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

lovedly

Thu, 2023-03-16 12:07

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and funny Gee
so many pass by
few now read or comment
even those who call me
BRO
You know
LOL
Thus now I really miss jess I confess
his possible comment
now u guess...

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Geezer

Thu, 2023-03-16 12:28

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we have so many poets here now, that it is hard to comment on all. I try hard, but I can't get to everyone. I will always try to get the old guard though. You deserve to be acknowledged, not that others don't, but you are a constant. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

lovedly

Thu, 2023-03-16 13:02

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COZ I'm the oldest age wise and lengthwise in NEOPOET
You honor me Thanks to thee
O Gee

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-03-16 19:33

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Hello, Lovedly,
So much up for interpretation here... I believe you are on the dance floor with your enchanting partner, doing the salsa. :)
Lav

lovedly

Fri, 2023-03-17 00:57

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it's sexy salsa waltz whatever
tnx

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