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Off Poetry
Poetry is a channel
for one's inner directions
many keep desires
deeply hidden
those who perceive
are intelligent
adore visuals
have an open mind
enjoy some bitter
black coffee
I love red wine
then only I shine..
you may or may not
with me 'tis fine
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2023-03-11 08:25
Yeah...
Never could drink much wine. [Although I do like sweet, bubbly stuff]. Champagne?
Yeah, many of us keep our desires hidden, revealing them in poetry and writings, but since they are fantasy, we find them easier to explain away. [It's only fantasy]. Hmmmm... I guess I've a lot 'splaining to do, huh? ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
lovedly
Sat, 2023-03-11 12:27
hAHAHAHHAHaaaaa
I'm Rafolling==LOL====RFLOL.....
scribbler
Sat, 2023-03-11 14:03
hi loved
poetry is often used to channel inner thoughts I think
lovedly
Sat, 2023-03-11 14:16
Yes Stan
you are right