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Off Poetry

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2023-03-11 04:11

Poetry is a channel
for one's inner directions

many keep desires
deeply hidden

those who perceive
are intelligent
adore visuals

have an open mind
enjoy some bitter
black coffee

I love red wine
then only I shine..
you may or may not
with me 'tis fine

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-11 08:25

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Never could drink much wine. [Although I do like sweet, bubbly stuff]. Champagne?
Yeah, many of us keep our desires hidden, revealing them in poetry and writings, but since they are fantasy, we find them easier to explain away. [It's only fantasy]. Hmmmm... I guess I've a lot 'splaining to do, huh? ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-11 12:27

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I'm Rafolling==LOL====RFLOL.....

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scribbler

Sat, 2023-03-11 14:03

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poetry is often used to channel inner thoughts I think

lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-11 14:16

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you are right

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