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TRYING HAIKU SEXY BYTE

Submitted by lovedly on Thu, 2023-03-16 04:14

Best way to pass time
is to waste it
about a small waist...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Thu, 2023-03-16 10:43

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to do with your vacation? I'm hoping that those cocktail bars on the beach have a few half-naked waitresses to serve the
panting old men, who tip recklessly for a peek at a future they have already passed. LoL
~ Geez.
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lovedly

Thu, 2023-03-16 12:07

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and funny Gee
so many pass by
few now read or comment
even those who call me
BRO
You know
LOL
Thus now I really miss jess I confess
his possible comment
now u guess...

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Geezer

Thu, 2023-03-16 12:28

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we have so many poets here now, that it is hard to comment on all. I try hard, but I can't get to everyone. I will always try to get the old guard though. You deserve to be acknowledged, not that others don't, but you are a constant. ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

lovedly

Thu, 2023-03-16 13:02

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COZ I'm the oldest age wise and lengthwise in NEOPOET
You honor me Thanks to thee
O Gee

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-03-16 19:33

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Hello, Lovedly,
So much up for interpretation here... I believe you are on the dance floor with your enchanting partner, doing the salsa. :)
Lav

lovedly

Fri, 2023-03-17 00:57

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it's sexy salsa waltz whatever
tnx

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