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Let's Now Not Cling

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2023-02-15 02:22

As we age
across life's each page
let's not now any longer rage
as we are about to leave this worldly stage

where since decades
we remain en caged
now we must pave our way
as newer actors come on stage
to show their rising ways

let's now shy away
as they now openly blissfully
orgasmic-ally engage

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Rosewood Apothecary

Wed, 2023-02-15 06:08

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Is this a poem about gracefully passing the torch to a younger generation?

Tim

lovedly

Wed, 2023-02-15 09:40

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very few vary
based on our
genes environment and circumstance
all vary but majorly minuscule..
as a matter of fact just saying
let's now not be the one's thriving on greed
Let's go on the laid out track
for each one some how differently
do you hear me

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Geezer

Wed, 2023-02-15 09:52

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want my younger siblings and the people that are my friends and family to have as good a time with reading, writing poetry and stories, as I have. How they do it, I leave up to them. Love ya, lovedly. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Wed, 2023-02-15 10:42

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Geezerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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lovedly

Mon, 2023-02-20 00:42

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for your inspiration and sweet content Live on we must then merge with the atmosphere as dust ...We all have no choice no voice
its a laid down drill

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Seren

Mon, 2023-02-20 05:18

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Your poem made me think of this quote...

"One day you will look back and see that all along you were blooming." - Morgan Harper Nichols

It's a wonderful poem. Bravo

Love and biggest hugs Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Mon, 2023-02-20 07:36

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your blooming pics sis
baby lol
nice quote though

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Seren

Mon, 2023-02-20 07:39

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Thats my Granddaughter her name is Abby, and I am in so in love with her, you'll see all four of my grandbabies I plan to change my picture more often!!!

love Sis x

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Mon, 2023-02-20 09:25

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what a treat 'twill be
friendly kids I love too
have 4 brightest kids
the world need to see too
ah hope some day
you will too

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