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I Can Now Hear Him

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2023-03-03 01:32

Honey voice of god
from veiled curtains
heavenly clouds

God also smiles for me
as I see and hear
the unknown being
where is God
still tell me

anybody!!!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
God visited me last night Ah not in imagery....
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Fri, 2023-03-03 13:16

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The big man himself? I hope that you are not due for a transfer! I wouldn't want to have to translate from angel-speak, when I read your work. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-04 12:24

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Why is neopoet having internet banging!

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-04 13:45

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site is being upgraded a little at a time, each and every day, no worries. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:01

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get a column fitted where we all can see how many have read me else am I writing only for me Yes I'm not as dull as you perceive we r aged blokes experienced and all spent ....few comments are but natural
Tell Paul all sights show ....how many have read blokes like me
hehehe
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:25

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you remind me of those people that I get friend requests from. They say I have thousands of friends on F.B. why won't you friend me? I don't have much in common with any of them. The only thing I can think of is that they know someone that I know. They just want to rack up thousands of friends to say, "I have thousands of friends." I am not interested in them. I don't answer them. I don't think that it is in the cards for this site, to have a reader count. I may be wrong, and it may appear, but I do believe that [Andy] who does the upgrades in more interested in keeping the site moving and accurate. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:41

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good nite Gee remain friendly with me need not comment I know u know when to treat me like a football like did jess so thanks Good morning////night...which ever

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:49

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I love about you lovedly, you always remain calm, cool and collected. I am always your friend. Like my wife says if I fear she is mad with me. I ask; "Do you still love me?" and she will reply, "Don't ask me now." LoL ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

lovedly

Sun, 2023-03-05 01:13

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you equate me with ma'am

Kindly on my behalf her greet
lol 4 u

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Seren

Mon, 2023-03-06 13:22

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I read the poem so short and it was well told and then I read your last few words. I'm not sure what to think after our conversation on your other poem. I'm a little confused and gobsmacked. Or I'd that God-smacked.

It's a nice poem and I think it's well constructed and I find nothing to critique.

Love Sis xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Mon, 2023-03-06 13:53

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snap poem was just staring into the darkness
blank
I heard a murmur
was it my heart!

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