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I Can Now Hear Him

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2023-03-03 01:32

Honey voice of god
from veiled curtains
heavenly clouds

God also smiles for me
as I see and hear
the unknown being
where is God
still tell me

anybody!!!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
God visited me last night Ah not in imagery....
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Fri, 2023-03-03 13:16

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The big man himself? I hope that you are not due for a transfer! I wouldn't want to have to translate from angel-speak, when I read your work. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-04 12:24

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Why is neopoet having internet banging!

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-04 13:45

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site is being upgraded a little at a time, each and every day, no worries. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:01

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get a column fitted where we all can see how many have read me else am I writing only for me Yes I'm not as dull as you perceive we r aged blokes experienced and all spent ....few comments are but natural
Tell Paul all sights show ....how many have read blokes like me
hehehe
Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:25

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you remind me of those people that I get friend requests from. They say I have thousands of friends on F.B. why won't you friend me? I don't have much in common with any of them. The only thing I can think of is that they know someone that I know. They just want to rack up thousands of friends to say, "I have thousands of friends." I am not interested in them. I don't answer them. I don't think that it is in the cards for this site, to have a reader count. I may be wrong, and it may appear, but I do believe that [Andy] who does the upgrades in more interested in keeping the site moving and accurate. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

lovedly

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:41

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good nite Gee remain friendly with me need not comment I know u know when to treat me like a football like did jess so thanks Good morning////night...which ever

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Geezer

Sat, 2023-03-04 14:49

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I love about you lovedly, you always remain calm, cool and collected. I am always your friend. Like my wife says if I fear she is mad with me. I ask; "Do you still love me?" and she will reply, "Don't ask me now." LoL ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

lovedly

Sun, 2023-03-05 01:13

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you equate me with ma'am

Kindly on my behalf her greet
lol 4 u

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Seren

Mon, 2023-03-06 13:22

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I read the poem so short and it was well told and then I read your last few words. I'm not sure what to think after our conversation on your other poem. I'm a little confused and gobsmacked. Or I'd that God-smacked.

It's a nice poem and I think it's well constructed and I find nothing to critique.

Love Sis xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

lovedly

Mon, 2023-03-06 13:53

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snap poem was just staring into the darkness
blank
I heard a murmur
was it my heart!

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