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O O O give me a kiss eh
O O O give me a kiss eh
hahaahahaaaaa
you said it friend
give me a kiss eh
never give in
when loss is assured
you may still win
I always advise my kids/gcs
''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
but do ask
IT MAY BECOME A
YES''
Else how will it ever
if you remain silent
They smile and say
give a 100 dollars
right away
I can only afford ten
they take it are happy
then run away
quickly return
kiss my cheeks for free
I smile
and be happy
won't you all too be!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
This one is a sequel to the last kissy poem of mine.
HOW TO GIVE A KISS ...across the INTERNET ...
A VERY WELL READ POEM is this
You'll love it
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2022-07-06 19:15
I like it.
When loss is assured
You may still win
Amazing!
Tim
lovedly
Wed, 2022-07-06 19:49
i knew when 5.6K LOVED IT
Neopoets will at least like it
Thanks
Rose
I'm sure Gee will follow
He asked for a lighter poem
Candlewitch
Thu, 2022-07-07 04:35
dear lovedly,
''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
but do ask
IT MAY BECOME A
YES''
Else how will it ever
if you remain silent
so very true!
*love, Cat
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Geezer
Thu, 2022-07-07 07:22
Now, there...
is a positive poem! So much nicer and uplifting! Yes, your pocket always has a no, but it can become a yes.
I had an acquaintance, that used to say that the reason he had so many girl-friends, was that he asked all that he liked,
eventually, one would respond to him. He said that if he asked a hundred, and ninety-nine said no, one said yes!
Nice to see a positive post, from my good friend lovedly. See? I asked for a nice, positive poem and I got a yes! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Thu, 2022-07-07 12:46
HIGH GEE
I'm always for a yes
only one has to ask
i had given two yeses to u
second u need to read
say yes to,,,lol G
IN LIFE
accept all yeses and no's
to be happyyyyyyyyyyyyy