Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

O O O give me a kiss eh

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-07-06 19:10

O O O give me a kiss eh

hahaahahaaaaa
you said it friend

give me a kiss eh
never give in

when loss is assured
you may still win

I always advise my kids/gcs

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
but do ask
IT MAY BECOME A
YES''

Else how will it ever
if you remain silent

They smile and say
give a 100 dollars
right away

I can only afford ten
they take it are happy
then run away
quickly return
kiss my cheeks for free
I smile
and be happy
won't you all too be!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
This one is a sequel to the last kissy poem of mine. HOW TO GIVE A KISS ...across the INTERNET ... A VERY WELL READ POEM is this You'll love it
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Rosewood Apothecary

Wed, 2022-07-06 19:15

Rosewood Apothecary's picture
Volunteer badge

When loss is assured
You may still win

Amazing!

Tim

lovedly

Wed, 2022-07-06 19:49

lovedly's picture

Neopoets will at least like it
Thanks
Rose
I'm sure Gee will follow
He asked for a lighter poem

author comment

Candlewitch

Thu, 2022-07-07 04:35

Candlewitch's picture
Volunteer badge

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
but do ask
IT MAY BECOME A
YES''

Else how will it ever
if you remain silent

so very true!
*love, Cat

*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

Geezer

Thu, 2022-07-07 07:22

Geezer's picture
Volunteer badge

is a positive poem! So much nicer and uplifting! Yes, your pocket always has a no, but it can become a yes.
I had an acquaintance, that used to say that the reason he had so many girl-friends, was that he asked all that he liked,
eventually, one would respond to him. He said that if he asked a hundred, and ninety-nine said no, one said yes!
Nice to see a positive post, from my good friend lovedly. See? I asked for a nice, positive poem and I got a yes! ~ Geez.
.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

lovedly

Thu, 2022-07-07 12:46

lovedly's picture

I'm always for a yes
only one has to ask
i had given two yeses to u
second u need to read
say yes to,,,lol G
IN LIFE
accept all yeses and no's
to be happyyyyyyyyyyyyy

author comment
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.