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FOLIAGE IS
Beautiful
in HOPES FOR EVER WE REMAIN
Birds come and sing
then fly away
that's life's ways always
none has come for ever to stay
life is like forest foliage
autumn may come as it may
great foliage smoulders away
you too may
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Music has always been the biggest cure for maladies of love be sure i did love playing in a band now i am deaf can't self cure but read lips and mind musifies it thanks all
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-06-05 06:43
dear lovedly,
I really like what you wrote in the last notes: " read lips and mind (musifies) it thanks all" musifies" what a great term!
yes, we fly high for awhile, especially when we are young...then we move on to the conclusion of our lives.
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-06-05 12:19
Thanks Cat
LIKE SHAKES...I too create new words
Geezer
Sun, 2022-06-05 16:38
Yep...
Musifying it does it for me too! Good work.~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-06-05 21:54
thanks GEE
For your yeps
ooo lalala lalala