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SWEET BLOODED ME
All run after me
my knees
are now
extremely weak
let me fall and bleed
they'll suck it
my blood is too sweet
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
As life ebbs body curls
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Mon, 2021-12-13 08:55
Are you feeling...
as though you are being stalked? Do you feel like you have run as far as you can with your poetry? That people are running you down to suck the life's blood of your work from you? We all feel that way sometimes. You are still pertinent, don't worry, be happy! Geez.
.
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Mon, 2021-12-13 10:47
You are still pertinent, Juss poetry not muchly
no worry,
am
still happy!
Geez.
thanks glad you screen me
.
Jackweb
Mon, 2021-12-13 21:23
I'm torchlighing this verse
I think I need a chisel to break it apart. LoL!
Very apt and highly condensed.
"my blood is too sweet" that's a terrific imagery.
"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb