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Who Knows FINALLY AMEN 'TWAS
When we reach the estuary
not to worry
your LORD
awaits thee finally
for a one so dear
this is a DEDICATION
not personal
but only a seven decades
extraordinarily association
so friendly
Tears seemingly flow
to wash the paths ahead
my heart alone knows
the sword of sorrows
end
finally amen
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Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-03-16 13:29
dear lovedly,
instead of NO, I think you want (NOT) what has you so sad dear friend? the dedication is lovely.
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-03-16 15:50
Cats you may read afresh
all your queries will be answered
kindness for sharing
the finale is yet awaited
outside
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author commentGeezer
Wed, 2022-03-16 21:04
Sorry...
if a friend or family member is very ill. It is hard to say goodbye to people close to you. I wish you the strength to deal with it.
I do like your choice of words, and the prayer for that person. Very nicely said. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Wed, 2022-03-16 21:39
Kindness GEE
0VER SIX DECADES ASSOCIATION
PRESENTLY IN ICU
TOMORROW MAY REVIEW
author commentlovedly
Thu, 2022-03-17 23:53
the end came and gone amen
the end came and gone amen
author commentCandlewitch
Fri, 2022-03-18 14:59
hello Lovedly,
so sorry for your loss.
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Fri, 2022-03-18 16:44
life moves on
the end was inevitable
now we continue
the eart continues its STABLE
CHANGE IS CHANGEABLE only
CONSTANT
Cats thanks
let the hearts bleed for a while
can't stop then move on
the world
the earth revolves
we also
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