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THOUGHTS TIMELY UNFURLED

Submitted by lovedly on Sun, 2022-08-21 22:03

When my thoughts unfurl
and
my deaf ears stand up
I wonder if I'm a pup

When shooting stars shriek
across the sky
are they for real
light sparse
no fire

If I'm always wondering
about you
and
you seem to dote me
am I then
the only true me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Triskelion

Fri, 2022-08-26 01:59

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only you can answer, and I say, YES, you are a pup!

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

lovedly

Fri, 2022-08-26 11:33

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pup puppy thankee

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