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Naive Plain Idiot

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2021-05-04 21:44

Born like an idiot
they called me naive
so that I did not understand
they wanted to show
they all are polite

They never learned to call
a spade a spade
so they such a pet name gave
so though foolish
I'd appear brave

Then their was no thesaurus
all was embedded in dictionaries
it took time to read
In the mean time more enemies
I did breed
was I naive for them
as free feed

Till one day I showed them
my seed
and proved it that
they were mere weed

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Wed, 2021-05-05 08:35

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as though you have had a difficult time with a faction named "They". I don't get the sense that it is over, but I also don't have a clue as to who you are talking about or what the issue is. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Wed, 2021-05-05 12:28

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this is just a soliloquy lol
yes just to relax
now i speak to self called
just a soliloquy
rflol

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