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In my wildest dreams

In my wildest dreams
I never thought you'd reply
a lost poet on Neopoet
read by all
but commented upon
like grass
on my head totally bald
though sparse

(hair still glowing)

This is no farce
I searched you in
the streets of Ontario
in Florida
and South America
Argentina,

hoping to find a guy
who only vomits all the time
words like tomorrows wine
bottled in super radiated sunshine
as an elixir
for the forth coming unborn
who have yet to be,
by women borne!!!

I take it the music
those sounds
have chained you all around
and
with no smear of lipstick nor rouge
your love all poets here have found
they relish....too...
but the poetry is recourse
imbibed by a minuscule few
and
one of them is solely
You!!!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
MOST ABSTRACT-EST POETRY THIS
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Comments

is not always exemplified by rhyme or meter. I find this very interesting. ~ Gee

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

thank you so much

Geezer
for your encouragement
neither rhyme nor meter
in my time
'twas inches and feet
to show off ones
exemplary feat!!!

author comment

A good write thought you would like this 5-7-5 one:-

My old yard stick here
Not metric, just three feet true
A milliners dream..

Yours, Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

hmmm?

W. H. Snow

A poet is a nightingale, who sits in darkness and sings to cheer its own solitude with sweet sounds. Percy Bysshe Shelley

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Snow Man

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