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GOD IS just a manifestation

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2020-02-25 12:23

GOD IS just a manifestation
of human mind

we all need scapegoats '
ere our own sacrifice
so man has invented a god
to lead
rather than be lead

god is you
if you cannot live without a creator
for me it's
SUN
O POET

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Tue, 2020-02-25 13:17

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started the whole thing! Was it "God"? Was it something that just happened ? Hmmmm… I suspect, that no one will ever know until they have finally passed through the veil of death. And then I don't see anyone coming back to definitively let us know! Be content, that we have life now, let the Afterlife take care of itself. ~ Gee.
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lovedly

Wed, 2020-02-26 00:27

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trillions have gone
not one sent a brief
so live life merrily

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lovedly

Sun, 2020-03-01 05:21

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we need one
when we ae abs
LONELY
IN THE DESERT
OR
at sea

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