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CIRCLE HULLA BALLOO MY VIEW

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2022-12-13 12:12

I dare to disagree
yes life goes in circles
each circle starts with a beginning
then it comes back to the same point

Being a scientist
I must add on
circles are round
the sun being static
other planets going around
anti cycle
meaning
NOT CLOCKWISE

All wonder how and why
Well a simple answer
folks don't understand
all existence is magnetic
without it we would never ever exist
be it human animal or planet

then there would have been
NO CIRCLES
Hope you hear me
motions come and go in
cyclic order only

Believe you me
LIFE IS ONLY CIRCULAR

The Neos also go around each
circling ....

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Last few words:

INSPIRED BY RAY

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

Jackweb

Tue, 2022-12-13 13:23

Wow

I can agree that a life cycle is a series of stages a living thing goes through during it's life. All plants and animals go through life cycles. Woven with artistic beauty!
.

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

M4GG0TM3NT4L

Tue, 2022-12-13 14:28

huh,

interesting take! i like the imagery, the use of captilization is also pretty nice :)

-m4gg0t was here

you could call me soph if you'd like.

The phantom of the opera is there. Inside my mind.

M4GG0TM3NT4L

Tue, 2022-12-13 14:29

also i think the title is

also i think the title is funny which is always a bonus

-m4gg0t was here

you could call me soph if you'd like.

The phantom of the opera is there. Inside my mind.

Lavender

Tue, 2022-12-13 19:01

Circle Hulla Balloo

Hello, Lovedly,
The fascinating circle of life - pretty amazing. All things are truly related and interlaced within one another. Very nice!
Lav

Rosewood Apothecary

Tue, 2022-12-13 21:21

Especially for Lovedly

Ouroboros

I am the birth of all tomorrows
The serpentine ouroboros
Wyvern eating it’s own tail
This transmigration of the soul

All things die must be reborn
In palingenesis of morn
Metempsychosis beyond death
Now reincarnate with this breath

Endless cycles, ancient snake
Devours itself for it’s own sake
Rain to rivers flow to seas
Rise to clouds which rain on me

lovedly

Wed, 2022-12-14 00:40

very good

you speak of REINCARNATION of life
but in another form ----no link to last one
at all

Hulllalllalllaa ballooo my view ...lol

author comment

Triskelion

Wed, 2022-12-14 02:10

But the sun is not static. A line can only return to a point relative to another point, as it is truly in a different place relative to the universe, physically and in time. We all are time travellers! Isn't it wonderful?!

Thomas

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...so like my lost dreams...the flood

lovedly

Wed, 2022-12-14 07:21