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CANDLES GLORY

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-11-02 23:57

Leave Not
till the candle light continues

keep composing poems
till goes off the candle

even in darkness
I compose

FREE VERSE

so far all loved
my verse

gave me points
to hold contests

am I not a
poeyet?
I ask you all

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
WHY LIGHT CANDLES
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Thu, 2022-11-03 00:02

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you are a poeyet. How could anyone doubt it? ~ Geez.
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lovedly

Thu, 2022-11-03 00:13

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rgds....

your second sentence not understood..Gee

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Rula

Thu, 2022-11-03 05:22

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You are a distinguished one, in a positive way.
You read all and all reads you
Even if they don't leave a word for you
Or two
Keep the candle's light on
Write on
You're the best.
Be yourself
Be you

❤❤❤❤❤❤

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lovedly

Thu, 2022-11-03 05:32

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like a bird with wings hurt tries to fly again
I had released my caged parrot ...later I realized it couldn't ....but that one time it flew towards the black cloud
and dropped ...thank god not dead
We couldn't trace it then
but after a few days it returned
strangely picked a nut from my extended palm and flew

never came again
how I wish I
am like that lovely parrot too
when I go
I shall also be GONE....
just remember me will you....
all NEO

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Rosewood Apothecary

Thu, 2022-11-03 06:11

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I love that theme. How many timeless stanzas can be written under the light of one slowly burning candle?

Tim

Lavender

Thu, 2022-11-03 10:09

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Hello, Lovedly,
You are both the light and the reflection of light. Beautiful poetry from a wise poeyet.
L

lovedly

Fri, 2022-11-04 01:49

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You are both the light and the reflection of light. Beautiful poetry from a wise poeyet.
You are a distinguished one, in a positive way.
You read all and all reads you
Even if they don't leave a word for you
Or two
Keep the candle's light on
Write on
You're the best.
Be yourself
Be you

I love that theme. How many timeless stanzas can be written under the light of one slowly burning candle?

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