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SUNDAY Those out there should review
An autumn leaf
be not alone
all are lonely
somewhere in the vastness
of eternity
someone calls out suddenly
still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
loneliness vanishes
unknown come in one’s dreams
screams
where have you been
one says
are you asking
a strewn autumn leaf
invisible one smiles
alongside
now 'tis autumn
there is no surprise
hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside
till then in my mind
reside
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Have you ever observed in dreams
dead never speak
yet they convey
Slowly silently
hear me
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2022-09-30 21:34
Dreams
I don’t remember many of my dreams. I do find this one particularly interesting. People passing away like leaves falling brushing past each other. Dreams dissipating into consciousness as we wake up like trees into bare winter. I like it.
Tim
lovedly
Fri, 2022-09-30 23:17
Thanks TIM
Next dream make it a point to try and speak with a now dead one
But you are so lucky so it seems
you never recall dreams
ONE in 7.5 billion
can't believe
lovedly
Sat, 2022-10-01 19:49
thanks Ray
for tye good words
all pray
scribbler
Sun, 2022-10-02 13:41
Hi loved
One of the best poems I've read in a while
lovedly
Sun, 2022-10-02 14:48
oooooooooooooooooooo
scribbler STAN
so sweet of
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glad for you