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A LOVER SENT ME A NOTE
......and the taste of you
through oranges
I'd thought of
apples or mangoes
but anything juicy
when in love goes
first testing dose
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sat, 2022-04-09 09:22
I not...
quite sure where this story goes. I feel like there is something missing. ~ Geez.
.
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lovedly
Sat, 2022-04-09 12:13
Missing yes
her love poem you want meto post it lol
Geezer
Sat, 2022-04-09 23:50
yes...
It might help.
` Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-04-10 08:40
what Geez says... *hugs, Cat
what Geez says...
*hugs, Cat
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-04-10 11:28
that poem is lost
in the blue
Now I have no clues