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NOVEMBER RANDOM CHALLENGE No9
1) I’M running away
why read below
Utter poetic poverty
suffer from it poets so many
is the new art
of not commenting
is it limited to poetic
November brevity
2) Mistaken Identity
mistaken Identity
no not really
this is real creativity
mistake not me
3.Wind
wind next to my heart
jokes apart
cliche don't recall
wind and heart to date
none can prostrate
4) City Lights
It's dull and cloudy
during day 'tis like night
homes we have to
lit our lights
the Mayor sanctions street light
In half an hour
throughout day and night
don't worry we all are bright
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
lovedly
Thu, 2021-11-11 15:54
make no mistake I'm building it up slowly
Mistaken Identity
no not really
I'm that creativity
mistake not me
Geezer
Fri, 2021-11-12 14:56
You still have...
time to build this one. Keep going~ Geez.
.
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Fri, 2021-11-12 16:22
thanks GEE
I know our NEOS have no DFA place
jess did not want it
so at times i play my own tricks
plenty of time
for football para 3.or 4 is it
lovedly
Fri, 2021-11-12 16:29
4. CITY LIGHTS
It's dull and cloudy
during day
'tis like a night
So we have to inside homes lit our lights
then the Mayor sanctions street light
In half an hour\ through out the night
lovedly
Wed, 2021-11-24 00:16
THANKS Mark
I was mixed up two contests simultaneously
This is the Random one
May see
merci