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Mom's Smiles (Just awarded an International contest GOLD
Mom’s Smiles
Very sentimental poetry
I recall my mom’s last eyes
no tears
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away
it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me
It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming
I smile back and ask
are you still waiting for me
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Mon, 2021-06-21 09:28
Your Mom...
will wait for as long as it takes. You came into this world with her, and you will go out and meet her. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Mon, 2021-06-21 11:31
tnx Gee
she has been waiting since 50 years plus now