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Tulips Roses And Lilly
Those who endure
love the lure
of Life
and
having come
to mommy Earth
love to survive
years long enough
ere you naturally die
so @81 I do still try
OOOOO SOOOOO
very niceeeee poemmy
thanx for reading mine
Tulips Roses And Lilly
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2020-10-11 13:50
Keep on...
trucking, maybe you will make it to a hundred! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2020-10-11 19:33
which way should one take it
healthy
or
as a curse
frndly Gee
either way thanks to thee/ye
Geezer
Mon, 2020-10-12 12:07
Healthy of course...
I wouldn't curse anyone with ill health to a hundred! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Mon, 2020-10-12 16:27
Hahahaha Gee
u r lovely