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Faith
He left my side,
so that from the world
I shouldn't hide
the faith that we are
what we are
not left bereft
humans can extend their imagination
to far off distant inconceivable destination
to explore
the life of those
who are not like us
we are rich
they maybe poor
but adjustment in life gives us a cheer
we make our own crucial decisions
and
call it destiny
the rich and poor can intermingle
have faith we all are one
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Geezer
Wed, 2019-11-13 10:14
Let's get together...
Yes, we should be able to all get along, but there are these things called ego and pride. Too bad that we can't stifle our urges to be the same, yet different. ~ Gee.
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Barbara Writes
Wed, 2019-11-13 10:30
good sentiment in poetry
we should all get along rich or poor..one day we all will be rich even if it's not in money and gold..but living our best life on our terms not society. well written
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lovedly
Wed, 2019-11-13 13:12
Oh Barbara
what a delight
having poetess like you
scan my
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c lynn brooks
Wed, 2019-11-13 15:08
Barbara
tour lst line says it all
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lovedly
Wed, 2019-11-13 16:54
we should all get along rich or poor..one day we all will be
yes all so true
thanks for ur maiden visit
c lyn brooks
Barbara Writes
Wed, 2019-11-13 19:03
you are welcome
my pleasure
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Rottiestyl
Thu, 2019-11-14 16:17
Lovedly
I interpreted this to mean those of us rich in faith are just as important as those who are not rich in that aspect. That we should share the faith we adore with all. This is entirely faith based. I know you wrote it under “faith” but you truly emit exactly that. Loved it.
Rottie
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He liked what he was,
nodded in respect and
simply flew . . . away.
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lovedly
Thu, 2019-11-14 18:52
you have been hiding in the woods so need to catch up friend
He* left my side,
so that from the world
I shouldn't hide
the faith that we are what we are not left bereft
*MY LONG TIME FRIEND PHILOSOPHER AND GUIDE
left me bereft the next day ----A VICTIM of Spiritualism
**humans can extend their imagination
to far off distant inconceivable destination
to explore the life of those who are not like us
**THIS PORTION SPEAKS OF a USA guy traced by his long distance g friend
we(SOME USA /CANADIEANS) are strikingly rich (west)
they(EAST) maybe poor
but adjustment in life gives us a cheer we make our own crucial decisions
and call it destiny
the rich and poor can intermingle THEY Finally got married
have faith we all are one .........>>>>>FAITH AS YOU DEEM FIT
Missed you interaction
glad you have returned
Umeh Collins Ebube
Fri, 2019-11-15 01:43
Well penned
Well penned
Collins
lovedly
Fri, 2019-11-15 14:32
and
thanks a lot
lovedly
Sun, 2020-03-01 05:27
UP graded
for those who may still like to read it