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Awakening
I never realized he was
till he was
but only when he wasn't
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Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Taste my new concept of
briefery
words like haiku
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Comments
Geezer
Thu, 2019-01-24 10:03
Hmmmmm....
Still trying to digest this one. ~ Geezer.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Thu, 2019-01-24 10:42
not so difficult
sum total
''one realises the value of some one
once that ''some one'' is absent
or no more
my newer briefer version
of conveyance
in fewer words
lovedly
Sat, 2019-02-02 09:44
One day soon I'll see again My lost fam-i-ly and friends.
This is abs IMAGERY
Do try and read my poem on a girls passing by
she said meet you on the other side
''NO OTHER SIDE''