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Human Naked Trees ((((Simply poetry liked by 800 only...)
Human Naked Trees
Did you ever realize
trees have a life ...
no soul ...
i.e. heart
human beings
as much as trees
produce seeds ..
and
as they seed fresher ones...
we do newer generations
breed...
after variety of weed
in the sea
we were like fixated trees ...
and
some billions of years
thence
we did to travel
commence....
but on all fours
do you know
or
want to know more ...
we all were trees
once before.
Have you ever seen
a vineyard leaf ...
it has veins like human
that’s how nature's God created ,
an ovum and sperm ...
to fix the length of all
at every corner of the body ....
fingers first of all
now we call DNA...
so we learned
through ages past ...
we all were trees
first at last
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Marvel Godwyn
Sat, 2017-11-25 14:09
A nicely composed piece
A nicely composed piece depicting human evolution.Thanks for sharing Lovedly.
lovedly
Sat, 2017-11-25 20:21
Thanks Marvel
for the nice comment
Gunnar Hedlund
Sun, 2017-11-26 05:49
gashes to ashes...
trees to knees,
how marvelous the view here
and the Atlantic breeze!
you're barking up the right tree.
nice one.
g
lovedly
Sun, 2017-11-26 08:26
barking is dog like
basking is enjoyable kind
which one did you friend
have in your mind
be slightly refined
Gunnar Hedlund
Sun, 2017-11-26 08:45
meaning you have...
...well executed your poem.
g
lovedly
Sun, 2017-11-26 10:28
Kindness .....thank you
you are now 801 reader
so niceeeeeeeee
Gunnar Hedlund
Sun, 2017-11-26 11:25
you are most welcome.
g