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Human Naked Trees ((((Simply poetry liked by 800 only...)

Human Naked Trees

Did you ever realize
trees have a life ...
no soul ...
i.e. heart

human beings
as much as trees
produce seeds ..

and
as they seed fresher ones...
we do newer generations
breed...

after variety of weed
in the sea
we were like fixated trees ...

and

some billions of years
thence
we did to travel
commence....

but on all fours

do you know
or
want to know more ...
we all were trees
once before.

Have you ever seen
a vineyard leaf ...
it has veins like human

that’s how nature's God created ,
an ovum and sperm ...
to fix the length of all
at every corner of the body ....
fingers first of all

now we call DNA...

so we learned
through ages past ...
we all were trees
first at last

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Comments

A nicely composed piece depicting human evolution.Thanks for sharing Lovedly.

for the nice comment

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trees to knees,
how marvelous the view here
and the Atlantic breeze!

you're barking up the right tree.
nice one.

g

basking is enjoyable kind
which one did you friend
have in your mind
be slightly refined

author comment

...well executed your poem.

g

you are now 801 reader
so niceeeeeeeee

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