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All Abide with me
Still abide with me....
You all are out of this world...
like me...
I am the sole soul
if there exists...
any....
take me along with you.....
as a butterfly does pollen....
then see what comes out
like
an enchanting progeny....
one like thee
Abide with me...
the winds are a blowing...
so still stay beside....
let the sunshine
as it used to ...
ere autumn
Till then stay warm within me...
Be not angry...
I will continue to compose
love poetry...
yes romantic
for all who continue to...
Just abide with me.....
Like the one who now
first does read
Queue up please
Okay now
continue to abide
as I now abide with thee....
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Geremia
Tue, 2015-12-22 14:34
very nicely composed;
very nicely composed; excellent flow,and I especially liked the use of anaphora which held the verses together in a delightful "music." Well done, my friend.
joe
lovedly
Tue, 2015-12-22 14:44
Hello Joe
last week I was in Chicago
hadn't composed one
all said why was I ill?
so this came to my mind
another one is
'''The American Girl
she smiled....'
will compose in suitable time
Thanks you uplift me
the blood in my veins flow
gosh how I wish you'd know
coming from your pen
my mind does glow
my ink of poetry also does bestow
and that Joe you know.
Grateful this is my contribution to Stans upcoming work
with a Foreward from you Joe
thank you
Sparrow
Thu, 2015-12-24 04:13
Loved
Hope you didn't get the wind up in Chicago it has been known,
Good write there young Bard, a bit more than usual but it was good.
As usual a quiet few day, the usual crap write at the top of my screen:- You have no new updates. Keep writing!
Yours as always, The Bards Mentor, lol.
Have a great holiday, Tis humbug rang throughout the mornings song another year wont be long, though one day longer than the last..
Yours Ian..
.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Thu, 2015-12-24 18:57
high 5 Ian 2016 is a week slowly c o m i n gggg
TY TC GB
So kind of you,
no snow this year
you know
still we all are Merry
all know
Just returned from the mall
No Father Christmas at call
kids smiling away too
moms and pops are happy
saving on photographs
too costly
as always this day
but turkey all will have
that's well and okay
to all POETS in the world
I wish
a Happy New Year too
2016
Sparrow
Fri, 2015-12-25 18:43
Loved
I wish you one of the best years you can have.
Just ask for what you need.
Not what you want,
Then extras will be so wonderful.
Take care young Bard and know we think of you,
Yours as always, Ian, Anne and the children..
.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Sat, 2015-12-26 13:45
thank you for your enlightenment Ian
u give me all the incentives
so i stand
Esker
Thu, 2015-12-24 06:59
a more composed flow
like an incantation in a way, I
like that difference Im seeing.
It's here in all the works of
late!
thank U...
lovedly
Fri, 2015-12-25 12:12
and thank you Esker
Merry Xmas to all Canadiens
Buddha
Sun, 2015-12-27 22:13
I can feel the passion in
I can feel the passion in your poem that speaks to me of togetherness. Of a journey through life with a kindred soul. Buddha...
lovedly
Mon, 2015-12-28 00:07
thank you
ur a good poet
lovedly
Fri, 2017-07-07 22:18
this poem if you read will tell you hoew neo improves clots
clots of poets like me
know this will ye