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Magical Kalypso Dance
Magical Kalypso Dance
No lust, just a prance
no frustration of breast feed
it’s just a demonstration
all views are were lovely
at the Kalypso's beach
where the sea was out of reach
but all in bikinis
serpentine
as in the airports immigration lines
all viewing with swallowed saliva
at the beauty around
and
gals and guys with almost nothing on
was a sight......
as when a gal
breast fed her kid
under the shade of a towel
held by her hubby,
boy friend could be...
Another
in the corner of the open veranda
in public view
had her bf to help her,
her undo
and
strip below his very sight
as she set her inner
and
pubic wet, right
with a replacement
unmindful of the world
as if we all are as blind
O what a sight
Breast feed
twas alright
for a variety of sight
different views of lovely ones
how I wish
I could for ever stay
in the Queue
But the sun was about to set...
Hahahahaaaaa
you will be surprised
it’s not what you think.......
'tis just a
Poem
Breast feed
Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-08-14 05:16
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sorry. you know i value your treasures when they happen
do way
why win;t you go away?
cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Wed, 2015-08-12 18:54
Jess if u say
good bye for today
when u are well come and say
cheers like always
on another site 79 liked it
sad they love my ways actual scenes this ok
lovedly
Wed, 2015-08-12 19:02
and Jess sorry 4 you
in another site 763 liked it
when it was just posted
lovedly
Thu, 2015-08-13 02:29
sorry Jess
latest 992 likes/views 2 days bad eh!
haven't got that many views here in all my neopoets life
weirdelf
Thu, 2015-08-20 01:52
you know to ignore me
when I can't spell.
Value your gems, my dear.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
lovedly
Fri, 2015-08-21 16:21
K
is on purpoe
u know why Jess
u know all my gems
as and when
this surely is one of them
no ?
Sparrow
Fri, 2015-08-21 19:00
Loved
Some of this was OK but you are becoming untidy, the theme seems to drift in and out, this is probably why Jess shouts at you even when his meds are off he still shouts good, I now his phraseology is not top line but read this again and you will see why, as this one could be one of your best for a while, Yours, Ian..
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Unconditional love to you all.
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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Sat, 2015-08-22 00:42
yeah tis many liked it
help try and brush it like a dogs tail
i will never be able to straighten
you may