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Magical Kalypso Dance

Magical Kalypso Dance

No lust, just a prance
no frustration of breast feed
it’s just a demonstration
all views are were lovely
at the Kalypso's beach
where the sea was out of reach
but all in bikinis
serpentine
as in the airports immigration lines
all viewing with swallowed saliva
at the beauty around
and
gals and guys with almost nothing on
was a sight......

as when a gal
breast fed her kid
under the shade of a towel
held by her hubby,
boy friend could be...

Another
in the corner of the open veranda
in public view
had her bf to help her,
her undo
and
strip below his very sight
as she set her inner
and
pubic wet, right
with a replacement
unmindful of the world
as if we all are as blind

O what a sight
Breast feed
twas alright
for a variety of sight
different views of lovely ones
how I wish
I could for ever stay
in the Queue

But the sun was about to set...

Hahahahaaaaa
you will be surprised
it’s not what you think.......
'tis just a
Poem
Breast feed

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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sorry. you know i value your treasures when they happen

do way

why win;t you go away?

cheers,
Jess
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good bye for today
when u are well come and say
cheers like always

on another site 79 liked it
sad they love my ways actual scenes this ok

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in another site 763 liked it
when it was just posted

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latest 992 likes/views 2 days bad eh!
haven't got that many views here in all my neopoets life

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when I can't spell.
Value your gems, my dear.

cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry

is on purpoe
u know why Jess
u know all my gems
as and when

this surely is one of them
no ?

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Some of this was OK but you are becoming untidy, the theme seems to drift in and out, this is probably why Jess shouts at you even when his meds are off he still shouts good, I now his phraseology is not top line but read this again and you will see why, as this one could be one of your best for a while, Yours, Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

help try and brush it like a dogs tail
i will never be able to straighten
you may

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