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What a Weekend 'Twill be

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2022-05-27 14:53

Animated Life Love
No Strife
Njoi
O BOY
LET Life Beget
Honey AND Glory
A Marvelous
Week END Story
NOT Gory

Life is only given for once
all life is a merry story
let it be your loving one
with the one
you wanted
FUN
most all your life
hope she became
your loving wife

Ah this is just poetry
how silly one can be
inquisitiveness kills me
lol

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Candlewitch

Sat, 2022-05-28 06:23

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I like the title, as reflected in the poem: enjoyment. and a great morning too you! I liked these lines:

LET Life Beget
Honey AND Glory
A Marvelous
Week END Story

hugs, Cat

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