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Uninhibited
Awake
Milky white skin
Pressed against barren trees
Earth shattering copulation
Sleepless
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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Geezer
Thu, 2023-03-02 18:16
Woooo...
Reminds me of when my ex and I went hunting one winter morning... Hmmmm. ~ Geez.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
RoseBlack
Thu, 2023-03-02 18:31
Hunting
If that's what you want to call it.....glad you enjoyed!
~RoseBlack~
author commentGeezer
Thu, 2023-03-02 19:50
Well...
we were hunting deer but decided to have a little break and warm up. ~ Geez.
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RoseBlack
Thu, 2023-03-02 19:51
I am sure
the latter was more fun than hunting deer!
~RoseBlack~
author commentGeezer
Thu, 2023-03-02 23:19
Uh-huh...
Absolutely!
~ Geez.
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Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2023-03-03 05:54
Kinda cold out there
Sounds steamy.
Tim
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-03-03 06:35
Body heat
Does wonders to combat the cold...
~RoseBlack~
author commentCandlewitch
Fri, 2023-03-03 06:55
dear Carrie,
for our honeymoon we took a motorcycle ride to Canada riding both our bikes. camping out was great, except for a very rainy night. we gt rained out and our tent was about to be floating downstream. we stuffed our wet clothes in duffels and went to a motel. checked in and found a 24 hr. laundry. before that we hit a liquor store for refreshment. we spent the night singing songs, with the goal of each singing the worst songs ever written circa 1950 to 1973. next day was beautiful and sunny.
I love your poem btw.
*hugs, Cat
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RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-03-03 09:09
I love the stories
Our poems invoke on here. Makes us think back to different times in our lives. Unfortunately I have not had an outdoor in nature experience but I have had the backseat of a car in a empty park experience if that counts.
~RoseBlack~
author commentGeezer
Fri, 2023-03-03 09:33
Yep...
It does! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
Fri, 2023-03-03 09:40
yes!
it counts ;)
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Clentin
Fri, 2023-03-03 10:08
Paints a very interesting
Paints a very interesting picture
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-03-03 11:48
Thank you
That was the goal!
~RoseBlack~
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