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Uninhibited

Awake
Milky white skin
Pressed against barren trees
Earth shattering copulation
Sleepless

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

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Reminds me of when my ex and I went hunting one winter morning... Hmmmm. ~ Geez.
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we were hunting deer but decided to have a little break and warm up. ~ Geez.
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the latter was more fun than hunting deer!

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Absolutely!
~ Geez.
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Sounds steamy.

Tim

Does wonders to combat the cold...

~RoseBlack~

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for our honeymoon we took a motorcycle ride to Canada riding both our bikes. camping out was great, except for a very rainy night. we gt rained out and our tent was about to be floating downstream. we stuffed our wet clothes in duffels and went to a motel. checked in and found a 24 hr. laundry. before that we hit a liquor store for refreshment. we spent the night singing songs, with the goal of each singing the worst songs ever written circa 1950 to 1973. next day was beautiful and sunny.

I love your poem btw.
*hugs, Cat

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Our poems invoke on here. Makes us think back to different times in our lives. Unfortunately I have not had an outdoor in nature experience but I have had the backseat of a car in a empty park experience if that counts.

~RoseBlack~

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It does! ~ Geez.
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it counts ;)

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Paints a very interesting picture

That was the goal!

~RoseBlack~

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