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THEY TOLD ME
God will descend to check your well being
So I went to the CHILDREN'S mass gathering
There he had come
just like any human
Smiled at me
THEN SENT MY MIND REELING
See docs told you smile till you die
you didn't listen so I came just to give you
oh silly one
one more chance
Go with kids dance
see me again after I've gone
Where he vanished in the crowd
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
They say HE exists but still can't believe it
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sun, 2022-07-03 05:37
dear lovedly,
you are not alone. I cannot believe it either! good poem. I like where your head is at...
*love, Cat
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lovedly
Sun, 2022-07-03 12:57
THANKS CATS
A strange occurrence happened
I composed this one thanks
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2022-07-03 18:28
Strange happenings
I’m not sure about god or any of that but…I know there’s magic and messages and if you’re looking around with the right lenses you see them everywhere. Great work.
Tim
lovedly
Sun, 2022-07-03 23:16
YOU RRRRRRRRRRRRR
great
thanks
Mr joghe
Thu, 2022-07-07 20:35
I like these lines "God will
I like these lines "God will descend to check your well being
So I went to the CHILDREN'S mass gathering"
You've done well!
"Words are currency of ideas and have the power to change world. Ride your pen on the rough road."
lovedly
Thu, 2022-07-07 22:19
MAY YOUR GOD
Bless u 4 reading
GRATEFUL