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A Son is Born Where's the Sin?

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2022-11-30 05:05

Performance Is Sunny Not Sinny

This is something so unique
what all humans and animals do
through the day and night
why you call God's mission
as Sin....

May I you remind
he posted women and man of your kind
to seed population
till they rest for months nine

you seed the soil of heaven's
and spread wings of heaven
mother earth is so happy
man you are working
helping god in his duty
we are just slaves
of the night

live to enjoy
play not save

the world has picked up
at break neck speed
haven't you heard about trains
dashing at lightening speed

sure you too will all beat
ere you rest in...
RIP
another comes and says
now see me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
Why were we born only for fun enjoy all
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Lavender

Thu, 2022-12-01 09:17

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Hello, Lovedly,
If I were to choose the lines that strike me here, they would be: "Live to enjoy. Play, not save."
Thank you,
Lav

lovedly

Thu, 2022-12-01 10:37

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Kindness Lav
I'm glad
liked you
have

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