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Some other time

Submitted by lovedly on Wed, 2023-02-22 11:32

Some other time...
my eyes are freshly wet
do await some more time

I now no more can mime
it's late at night
need more rhyme

sleep over powers me
let dawn rise
overnight
I will become
may be wise
may be not
if comes early
my demise
then as you prefer soul
I solely
shall rise

be happy...
or many 'twill be a surprise

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Wed, 2023-02-22 12:50

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You are supposed to only post ONE poem at a time! I think you are in violation of Neopoet Rules!

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lovedly

Thu, 2023-02-23 09:13

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now who reads this

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Lavender

Thu, 2023-02-23 18:10

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Hello, Lovedly,
This feels as if there is a lot on your mind late at night. I hope you are well, Lovedly!
Lav

lovedly

Fri, 2023-02-24 00:31

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I work mostly at night Lav

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