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she one two and three

She One

What a beauty she

Such beauty friend
is rarely found
the world
I have gone around

she soothes the mind
and speaks of soul
who would even dare
to think of her as a whole

adore her angelic beauty
she will love it more
than the vile eyes who glare
galore

and

she fears to dare
as she shudders more

such inspiration comes to me
a romantic poet that I so be
such marvelous
creation of Almighty
is not to devour

but to enjoy by the hour...

but just see
what a lovely
She!

She two
let the sleeping beauty sleep... let us hear her heart beat...the rhythm sends vibes for me ...do they not for friend thee... she is lovely in the nakedness ...no not vulgar at all...she is no prude ...so I dare say ...don't be rude.... the lovely beauty tis a pleasure to see ...my eyes devour me... as I alone, her only see... in the midst of this vast maddening crowd.... you call it a world... no doubt.... where can one find ...such solace, comfort and peace ....as she does in her silent sleep...it enamours me... how so sweet she be!

She Three

Who is she awaiting for
just ask her someone she may be waiting for you just anyone ask someone who is she waiting for in the shore alone why has she come alone ask someone who is she waiting for someone or none ask anyone who is she ...
Our eyes
now hers
asks
who is she

My Eyes Now she

I have always felt
a sleight of ego
as I adore my eyes
all by myself

each passerby unknown to me
glares into my eyes
a man guy woman and lass
so as to ask

where did I get such lovely eyes
I smile and tears roll into their eyes

they also smile

now when I see your eyes

I smile
Living beauty
she...

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Comments

A lovely write, a bit long to crit with ease, but a grand read.
I shall leave this as it is, in its state of being able to see such beauty around you, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

padri /parson/pundit/maulvi/etc???
showed semi nude gals
and he is a musician also
and said
these snaps inspired him
so i too composed
better perhaps

he asked me to scrap /wrap
which i did
then composed afresh and posted these

So lets wait and see whether others read

Epicurial yes
these.

but three separately
thanks for ur liking as it is..
Lets await alid he reads

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a good poem it is.

Alid

Ian and I knew
you will love it
it will raise your morale too
now read another latest one
will u

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