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RISE TO FALL

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2022-11-05 13:17

and fall
it's FALL!

Sundays we arise
God yours not mine
sleeps
where in heaven
don't ask me

I have seen none
till yesterday
I passed across a street
the house builders shop
he displayed a billboard

''A nicely decorated house
fully artistically furnished
lots of fruits on the dining table
HERE LIVES GOD
IN PEACE
'TIS PARADISE''

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
STILL SEARCHING PARADISE ....AS THE DICE IS BEING CAST
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Sat, 2022-11-05 20:26

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Hi, Lovedly,
Still searching for paradise. "Lots of fruits on the dining table." I guess paradise has different meanings for a lot of us. Lots to think about here...
L

lovedly

Sun, 2022-11-06 01:42

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is outright
IMAGERY
NONE LIKE EARTH
YET found anywhere
by anyone
in HOPES
we ALL live
Ma'am Lav
glad you alone read me

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