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NOT NEW Evanescence
Evanescence
the heart fears
the loss of someone
so loved
would we lose all memory
a loved one lost to eternity
in moments
like a rainbow in the sky
after a brief rainy storm
just comes and vanishes
in a moment
like the rainbow
across the Niagara mist
does
Evanescent
sense of fragrance it does leave
but fading memory a fear breeds
will ye forget the one that came
but now has gone
a young one
just of three days
only
lost her mommy
sad isn't it
but it's destiny
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
natures extreme cruelty
sadness
Editing stage:
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Comments
lovedly
Mon, 2018-12-03 12:33
Oh my
was it nonsense
none have read it even once
two months
all attention