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Never go grey

Once a friend told me
Hi you are getting grey so early
I was just maybe in my thirties
here apply this cream
your hair won't ever turn white
note I said ''ever''
NEXT week I told him
all my hairs had fallen
see idiot
how right I was
I had said won't grow grey
ever

I am now a classified astrologer lol
some guy he ...

laughingly at the bridge table
dropped the creme
he bent down
and
fell without a scream
smiled away and said see ..lol
as he passed away ...
God,
saved some of his creme

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gotta read that fine print lol

yeah thanks

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