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INNER STORY

Submitted by lovedly on Tue, 2022-11-01 00:35

Let me see
your inner
not inners

I'm past that age
Let me see

Let me see your inner self
the desires
love you share
mostly with me

then others
as you may

Let me see
show me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Lavender

Tue, 2022-11-01 18:25

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Hello, Lovedly,
Yes! Isn't that what true poetry is, discovering and revealing your inner self?
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lovedly

Wed, 2022-11-02 00:46

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Yes of course thanks

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