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Hybrid

Submitted by RoseBlack on Thu, 2023-01-26 21:27

Skin like snow
Amber eyes of fire
Vermillion velvet lips
Gnarled by opalescent fangs

Ivory talons
That snatch in the night
Drinking blood from her victims
A gorey sight

Howling at the moon
She cried out in vain
A mix of confusion and purpose
Hybrid is her name

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Content level:

Not Explicit Content

Comments

RoseBlack

Thu, 2023-01-26 22:21

Thanks Kat

The wheels are spinning....a mix of lycan and vampire poems...perhaps my own book...

~RoseBlack~

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RoseBlack

Thu, 2023-01-26 23:13

Thanks Mark

These are fun to write

~RoseBlack~

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Indivisible_Origin

Thu, 2023-01-26 23:28

Minotaurs

What of those? Any in your repertoire? I wrote of one once ages ago. I'm a fan of your work.

RoseBlack

Fri, 2023-01-27 02:59

Hello

I have not written about minotaurs. I'm am more into Lycans and vampires. I am glad you like my work.

~RoseBlack~

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Rosewood Apothecary

Fri, 2023-01-27 05:23

Are you doing a series

It sounds like a continuation from yesterday. You should come up with a story. Do a little chapbook, with your sketches.

Might be cool
Tim

RoseBlack

Fri, 2023-01-27 06:17

I was considering

A series.. I like the whole lycan and vampire concept...even before the Underworld became popular. I am not sure how well I can do with the artwork but it would be fun to try...great idea. thank you!

~RoseBlack~

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2023-01-27 06:33