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Hybrid
Skin like snow
Amber eyes of fire
Vermillion velvet lips
Gnarled by opalescent fangs
Ivory talons
That snatch in the night
Drinking blood from her victims
A gorey sight
Howling at the moon
She cried out in vain
A mix of confusion and purpose
Hybrid is her name
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Thu, 2023-01-26 22:21
Thanks Kat
The wheels are spinning....a mix of lycan and vampire poems...perhaps my own book...
~RoseBlack~
RoseBlack
Thu, 2023-01-26 23:13
Thanks Mark
These are fun to write
~RoseBlack~
Indivisible_Origin
Thu, 2023-01-26 23:28
Minotaurs
What of those? Any in your repertoire? I wrote of one once ages ago. I'm a fan of your work.
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 02:59
Hello
I have not written about minotaurs. I'm am more into Lycans and vampires. I am glad you like my work.
~RoseBlack~
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2023-01-27 05:23
Are you doing a series
It sounds like a continuation from yesterday. You should come up with a story. Do a little chapbook, with your sketches.
Might be cool
Tim
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 06:17
I was considering
A series.. I like the whole lycan and vampire concept...even before the Underworld became popular. I am not sure how well I can do with the artwork but it would be fun to try...great idea. thank you!
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Fri, 2023-01-27 06:33
dear Carrie,
I think you should do it! it's genius!
*ever, eddy & cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 07:22
Thanks Cat
I will give it a try
~RoseBlack~
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2023-01-27 06:39
“…it would be fun to try.”
Then do it silly. Lol
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 07:22
It's the drawings
I'm not sure about. I primarily do faces.
~RoseBlack~
Alex Tanner
Fri, 2023-01-27 10:32
Hybrid
I like it Rose. Alex
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 15:23
Thanks Alex
Glad you enjoyed
~RoseBlack~
Seren
Fri, 2023-01-27 12:26
Dear Carrie
I loved the carry on from Wolf Moon. I really think it's a great poem.
Looking forward to the rest of your series.
Brava!!!
Love & hugs Jayne xxx
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 15:24
Thanks Jayne
More to come...Lycans don't need a full moon to shapeshift.
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Fri, 2023-01-27 19:21
Hybrid
Hello, Carrie,
This seems to flow as a natural realm for you - great writing!
L
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-27 19:28
Thank you L
It really does!!! More to come
~RoseBlack~