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human beings at times are
human beings at times are
worse than animals
develop their balls faster than changing Falls
A place called NIAGARA HERE
has a significant fall
so all over the world i have seen
kids being squashed as orange balls
Once in the far East
a kid came to a tourist
and clearly
said for 2 dollars .....a booze
you can snooze
and
forget all the gals they couldn't be worse .........
As you'd say ee Cumming is coming .....
The drugist took a dose and burst out his liquid dose
sans
was when he discovered his last ten dollars
others istill in Q .........
would you believe this way are born dicks blue.....
I used ellipses
till they nearly squeezed me here............................
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Thu, 2022-07-21 20:35
human beings at times are
Hello, Lovedly!
Hope you are staying well. What a poem! I cannot say that I completely understand its message clearly, but I do feel the energy - some random thoughts that cause one to stop and think. Most of your poetry has a line or two that always stands out to me, and in this poem, it is your final line. "I used ellipses till they nearly squeezed me here..." What a fantastic image. So good!
Thank you!
Lavender
lovedly
Thu, 2022-07-21 22:45
Thanks Lav
How nice to c u walk thru
I'm FINE
Ray Whitaker
Tue, 2022-07-26 12:42
So mean, so loving, so everything
Human capacities
I wish that I could be a prolific a writer as you appear to be
Your last stanza lost me, tho
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lovedly
Tue, 2022-07-26 13:56
prolific a writer as xxxxyouxxx I AM ....NOT appear to be!!!!!
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Make a poet out of me
poet RAY
ye be friendly