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HAPPY BIRTHDAY SCORPIO KIDS

Life is like a flowing river
at times the flow is like Brahmaputra
oceanic in fervor.

most of the times it's silent soft and slow
as is the river Nile...appears still
all rivers must flow towards the ocean
a desired vision
towards newer association
mother and daughter
in pose together
gives a loving spectrum...

love you as the rising sun
reaching its zenith
then after all deeds
sun promises to arise
after sunset

So my child steer above
into the deep azure blue sky
with the wings not of a butterfly
but like an eagle's
reach higher than high
its within ability of each
to the top of Mount Everest reach
so will you

love flows like nectar

from dad to all of you
Happy Birthday to you

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Free verse
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Hello, Loveldy,
This is a beautiful birthday wish - one of the most generous and loving wishes I've seen or heard. And the poetry is so refined and tender. I get the feeling this is personal for you, perhaps dedicated to your daughter? If not, my apologies, but Happy Birthday to all born on this day!
Beautiful!
Lav

Its for her
no apologies
only appreciation please...

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