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halve me
I am only half
In 1970's I died in an accident
went to heaven
My doggy belt was held by my wife
as a dogs
and she pulled me back alive
I was recalled by humans
Half side almost dead
left-hand side of head
was bloated red
How I wish I had flown to heaven
Now again in late 1990's
I faced a calamity
the brain was again fractured
half an eye
half an ear
nerves pulsating
I tell no one
not even to those to me so dear
as death I have been awaiting
at the threshold of time
ere I was born
half alive
half dead
still am swimming ahead many
who ought to never have been read
ought to have been since long dead
I still await!
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Comments
judyanne
Tue, 2015-01-27 03:57
great loved
i would suggest you write 'LHS' out full - 'left-hand side'
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
lovedly
Tue, 2015-01-27 10:20
for once Judy..... you passed me
left hand side twill be
yes
left-hand side
mand
Tue, 2015-01-27 04:30
Loved
As Judy say's great! :)
LOve Mand xxx
Geremia
Tue, 2015-01-27 13:48
very well composed. great
very well composed. great impact. bravo !!!!!
joe
lovedly
Tue, 2015-01-27 15:32
thank u so much
my best poet friend Joe
how did this last week go?
Geremia
Tue, 2015-01-27 15:58
bad....a matter of time.
bad....a matter of time.
lovedly
Tue, 2015-01-27 16:20
and this too shall
pass ..............
we all come this way
only once
stay as much as you can
compose poetrys and life combine
smooth and calm your mind
tis will divine
not yours nor mine
i too am half nerves
at any way standing on side kerbs
who can say who will shed
a first tear you or I?
lets into the wilderness fly
where in the oasis and mirages
poets lie
ere one to the world says bye
ere we sans all