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Friday daylight beach

Submitted by lovedly on Sat, 2017-07-29 13:34

Friday daylight beach

Yesterday was Friday
we went to the far off beach
'twas a sunny and bright day
driving was fun all the way

There we saw all in bikinis
all guys almost in nude
brawling tummies
not worried

all were sun bathing
half on their backs
the other half upwards bound
no one was worried
who was looking around

they all know we all have concealed
what we don't else wise have revealed

we all similar desires reveal
come sun bathe with us
please.

Yesterday was Friday
we went to the far off beach
'twas a sunny and bright day
driving was fun all the way

There we saw all in bikinis
all guys almost in nude
brawling tummies
not worried
all were sun bathing
half on their backs
the other half upwards bound
no one was worried
who was looking around
they all know we all have concealed
what we don't else wise revealed

we all similar desires reveal
come sun bathe with us please.

Style / type:

Free verse

Review Request (Intensity):

I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft