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HI-JACK UP JILL
No we don't yearn
all are brought by negligence
(no condoms)
else desire
when both are on
like inferno raging fire
later when sans all
Shakespeare's call
we hold hands
till we walk along the river's bank
hands though soft
now limber-less lifeless
we merge with the ocean of time
unknown for all wondrous poetic rhyme
only memories live behind
for a minuscule few
they make stone trees
as tall as palm ones
which also decay then die
in some tornadoes or tsunamis
more different ones come along
you and I never do
nor ever will
but later born
will be modifications
of many JACKS
but a single
Jill's
oven one only
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2020-10-04 13:45
Believe it...
or not, there are people out there that actually WANT children and plan for them! Imagine that? ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2020-10-04 18:00
yeah you and I
did too
many still shooo
take that kid with you
I have many others to woo
long Q
Ray Whitaker
Wed, 2020-10-07 05:33
Interesting!
Like the content, and the flow. The three line stanzas work better ( for me, anyway)
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lovedly
Wed, 2020-10-07 12:29
and
thanks