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Solarly Creator
If any
is
Sun
it ignites and flames
and does every one
burn
then
finally
churn
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Dandini
Wed, 2021-01-27 12:25
I can understand why this has
I can understand why this has been ignored for over a year.
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lovedly
Wed, 2021-01-27 13:41
and why
what is ur understadning
Dandini
Thu, 2021-01-28 11:36
To be frank, it's not very
To be frank, it's not very good.
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lovedly
Thu, 2021-01-28 12:19
thanks
you are frank
man
but u must say why show ur ability to critique anyone can just form an opinion just one
Dandini
Thu, 2021-01-28 17:57
Sorry I don't understand your
Sorry I don't understand your sentence.
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